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Why donuts have circle among?

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In 1937, Vernon Rudolph STARTED the Krispy Kreme Doughnut Company in North Carolina. He (buy) BOUGHT a secret doughnut recipe from a French chef in New Orleans and then (open) OPENEND his first small doughnut shop. The doughnuts were small pieces of dough fried in oil and covered with a sweet glaze. Because people told Rudolph they wanted to buy the doughnuts when they were hot, Rudolph DECIDED to cut a hole in the wall of his shop and SOLD the doughnuts immediately after the bakers COOKED them. These days, the “Hot Doughnuts Now” sign outside a Krispy Kreme shop SENDS a message to customers that hot, fresh doughnuts are available inside. Because of the popularity of the doughnuts, the Krispy Kreme Company HAD GROWN immensely since the first shop opened in 1937. Krispy Kreme doughnuts ARE now available in Canada and Asia, and franchises ARE COMING to the United Kingdom in the near future. Soon, people all around the world EAT the hugely popular North American treat that BEGAN over half a century ago.
In 1937, Vernon Rudolph
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Kreme
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BOUGHT
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recipe from a French chef in New Orleans and then (open)
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small
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doughnut
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. The
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were
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small
pieces of dough fried in oil and covered with a sweet glaze.
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Because
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people
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Rudolph they wanted to
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buy
the
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doughnuts
when they were hot, Rudolph DECIDED to
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cut
a hole in the wall of his
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shop
and SOLD the
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doughnuts
immediately after the bakers COOKED them. These days, the “Hot
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Doughnuts
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Now
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SENDS
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are available inside.
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Because
of the popularity of the
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, the
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HAD GROWN
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shop
opened in 1937.
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ARE
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now
available in Canada and Asia, and franchises ARE COMING to the United Kingdom in the near future.
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Soon
,
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all around the world EAT the
hugely
popular North American treat that BEGAN over half a century ago.
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IELTS essay Why donuts have circle among?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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