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Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success? 6wqr
It is generally saying that, persons who dropped their study before completion are reached at apex level easily compare to those who finished the study properly. In this essay we discuss why they are good in successfully achievement and what are their demand to reach there. Here, I have noticed that, sometime strong family background responsible for those who are brilliant in books as they are behind them to complete the schooling forcefully which lead student to avoid their work freely. Whereas those who are self-made, they might not have even that wealthy family background who pressurize them to do the same hence, these persons think by themselves. For instance, Bill Gates & Dhirubhai Ambani are the top most businessmen, also i found that, they are not from the well family and besides they reach at top level in the world by their own way and thanks to learning tactics from the failure which I believe most important for anyone. Now, I think better understanding, hard work, great enthusiasm, smart work can lead any half educated person to any level of world. Even in school we have faced sometimes that dull student solve ''tricky puzzle'' easily while topnotch student think a lot to solve the same. Moreover, Luck and courage are also play a key role to get victory which I have researched, that factors are available in that type of students. In conclusion, not only fortune but having a full education and guidance play a vital role to go for the long run of any type of business' success. So we cannot always believe that who has have not completed their education can get a victory.
It is
generally
saying that, persons
who
dropped their study
before
completion
are reached
at apex level
easily
compare to those
who
finished the study
properly
. In this essay we discuss why they are
good
in
successfully
achievement and what are their demand to reach there.

Here, I have noticed that, sometime strong family background responsible for those
who
are brilliant in books as they are behind them to complete the schooling
forcefully
which lead student to avoid their work
freely
. Whereas those
who
are self-made, they might not have even that wealthy family background
who
pressurize them to do the same
hence
, these persons
think
by themselves.
For instance
, Bill Gates &
Dhirubhai
Ambani
are the top most businessmen,
also
i
found that, they are not from the well family and
besides
they reach at
top level
in the world by their
own
way and thanks to learning tactics from the failure which I believe most
important
for anyone.

Now
, I
think
better understanding,
hard
work, great enthusiasm, smart work can lead any half educated person to any level of world. Even in school we have faced
sometimes
that dull student solve ''tricky puzzle''
easily
while topnotch student
think
a lot to solve the same.
Moreover
, Luck and courage are
also
play
a key role to
get
victory which I have researched, that factors are available in that type of students.

In conclusion
, not
only
fortune
but
having a full education and guidance play a vital role to go for the long run of any type of business' success.
So
we cannot always believe that
who
has
have
not completed their education can
get
a victory.
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IELTS essay Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

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4 paragraphs
277 words
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