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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? xrKN
First and foremost, illiteracy is identified as one of the gravest problem in many countries. As a consequence of this situation, individuals could not pursue suitable career with sufficient income and build startups based on their innovative ideas. Furthermore, unemployment and accelerating population is other intricate issue worldwide. This is due to the fact that, adequate number of jobs are not available in various sectors for every qualified proffessional.
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IELTS essay Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

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