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Who influence more, family or friends?

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Now
i want to argue about importance of family.
Absolutly
family is more
important
than
friends
because
they are more reliable and honest than
friends
. we should know non of our
friends
wont
help
us in the complex.

On the other hand
we need
friends
to have exciting life

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IELTS essay Who influence more, family or friends?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
236 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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