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Who did danger derived from in food production and Preservation outweigh the advantages? And include relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge

Who did danger derived from in food production and Preservation outweigh the advantages? And include relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge 0M17l
Most food that are purchased these days in a small stores and supermarkets have chemical in them Mr used to improve production and in short the food last for longer however there are concerns that these have harmful effect in my opinion the potential danger from this or greater than the benefit we receive There are several reasons why chemicals are placed in food first lady's to improve the product to the eye and this is achieved via the use of colourings which encourage people to purchase food that may otherwise not looked anything to eat another reason to preserve the food much of the food we eat would not actual last that long if it were not for chemical they contain so again this is an advantage to the companies that sell food as a product have a longer shelf time. Evidence it is clear to me that the main benefit are therefore to the company's not the customers although companies claim these food additives or save and they have research to support this the research is quite possibly biased as it calms from their own companies or people with connection to these companies it is coming to read report these days in the press that possible name to various health issues such as cancer food additives have also been linked to prove the problems such as hyper activity in children. To conclude despite the fact that there are benefits to placing chemical in food I believe that these principles can help companies but could be danger to the public it is unlikely that these practice can stopped so food must be clearly labelled and it is my hope that organic product will become more readily available at reasonable price to all.
Most
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food
that are
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purchased
these days in a
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small
stores and supermarkets have
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chemical
in them Mr
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used
to
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improve
production and in short the
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food
last for longer
however
there are concerns that these have harmful effect in my opinion the potential
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danger
from this or greater than the benefit we receive

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chemicals
are placed
in
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food
first
lady's to
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improve
the product to the eye and this
is achieved
via the
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use
of
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colourings
which encourage
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people
to
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purchase
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food
that may
otherwise
not looked anything to eat another reason to preserve the
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food
much of the
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food
we eat would not
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actual
last that long if it were not for
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chemical
they contain
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so
again this is an advantage to the
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companies
that sell
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food
as a product have a longer shelf time.

Evidence it is
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clear
to me that the main benefit are
therefore
to the
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company
's not the customers although
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companies
claim these
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food
additives or
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save and
they have research to support this the research is quite
possibly
biased as it calms from their
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own
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companies
or
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people
with connection to these
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companies
it is coming to read report these days in the press that possible name to various health issues such as cancer
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food
additives have
also
been linked
to prove the problems such as hyper activity in children.
To conclude
despite the fact that there are benefits to placing
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chemical
in
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food
I believe that these principles can
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help
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companies
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but
could be
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danger
to the public it is unlikely that these practice can
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stopped
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so
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food
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must
be
clearly
labelled and it is my hope that organic product will become more
readily
available at reasonable price to all.
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IELTS essay Who did danger derived from in food production and Preservation outweigh the advantages? And include relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
293 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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