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Who are the students? What do they do when they graduate or complete their studies at your school? What kind of work do their parents do? How are students selected to attend your school? Please briefly share any other important information about the school community here.

Who are the students? What do they do when they graduate or complete their studies at your school? What kind of work do their parents do? How are students selected to attend your school? Please briefly share any other important information about the school community here. yyPP
Who are the students? What do they do when they graduate or complete their studies at your school? What kind of work do their parents do? How are students selected to attend your school? Please briefly share any other important information about the school community here. (200 words) Community is important for forming character and behaviour of the children. It is little society around you. It plays great role in our personal and school life. School where I work is situated in suburb, one of the districts of Baku. The population of our community is mixed. The people of the community are friendly. There are a lot of schools in our school community. That’s way there is a big competation among the children. Students who want to study in our school should pass special exams. These are written and verbal exams. After passing first written exam, the principle of school organizes verbal exam. Here the teachers of the school ask different question in order check the learners’ both intellectual and outlook skills. After passing both tests the eligible learners get right to study at school. Student are busy all day. They take part in their lessons. Furthermore, they are active not only at their lessons but also after classes activities. They participate different clubs in order improve their skills. While studying at school most studentstake interest to participate in different contests. This can be virtual intellectual games, TV competition, competition among schools of capital, or different Olympic games. After graduating school, the majority of learners give exam to local and foreign universities. Their aim is to be professional and be one of the bestspecialists on their sphere. The rest of them continues their education in vocational institutions. They also desire to be beneficial to the society. The parents of the learner always support them in any case. They try to do their best for children. Parent always encourages them for good future. Gives them advice, always spend time with their children in order share their difficulty. They are the best friend of them.
Who are the
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students
? What do they do when they graduate or complete their studies at your
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school
? What kind of work do their parents do? How are
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students
selected to attend your
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school
?
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Please
briefly
share any other
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important
information about the
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school
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community
here. (200 words)
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Community
is
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important
for forming character and
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behaviour
of the
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children
. It is
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little
society around you. It plays great role in our personal and
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school
life.
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School
where I work
is situated
in suburb, one of the districts of Baku. The population of our
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community
is mixed
. The
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people
of the
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community
are friendly. There are
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a lot of
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schools
in our
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school
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community
. That’s way there is a
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big
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competation
among the
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children
.
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Students
who want to study in our
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school
should pass special exams. These
are written
and verbal exams. After passing
first
written exam, the principle of
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school
organizes verbal exam. Here the teachers of the
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school
ask
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different
question in order
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check
the
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learners’
both intellectual and outlook
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skills
. After passing both
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tests
the eligible
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learners
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get
right to study at
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school
.
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Student
are busy all day. They
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take part
in their lessons.
Furthermore
, they are active not
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only
at their lessons
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but
also
after classes activities. They participate
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different
clubs in order
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improve
their
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skills
.
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studying at
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school
most
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studentstake
interest to participate in
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different
contests. This can be virtual intellectual games, TV competition, competition among
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schools
of capital, or
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different
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Olympic games
. After
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graduating
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school
, the majority of
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learners
give exam to local and foreign universities. Their aim is to be professional and be one of the
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bestspecialists
on their sphere. The rest of them continues their education in vocational institutions. They
also
desire to be beneficial to the society. The parents of the
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learner
always support them in any case. They try to do their best for
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children
. Parent always encourages them for
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good
future. Gives them advice, always spend time with their
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children
in order share their difficulty. They are the best friend of them.
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IELTS essay Who are the students? What do they do when they graduate or complete their studies at your school? What kind of work do their parents do? How are students selected to attend your school? Please briefly share any other important information about the school community here.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
343 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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