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While various factors such as. . . have contributed to this situation, certain steps could be taken to tackle this problem. There are several causes of this(problem caused by) this situation. The main one is that Another cause/problem is that In addition Various possible courses of actions could be taken in order to address the above. In the first place/Firstly The most obvious solution would be to Furthermore In conculsion, variosul factors have led to the problems related to. . . . , but this situation could be addressed by. . . . Given the situation, it is recommended/ important
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There are several causes of this(problem caused by) this situation.

The main one is that

Another cause/problem is that

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Various possible courses of actions could
be taken
in order to address the above.

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first
place/
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The most obvious solution would be to

Furthermore


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IELTS essay While various factors such as. . . have contributed to this situation, certain steps could be taken

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
99 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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