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Which way of life do you prefer?

Which way of life do you prefer? ndmGo
I prefer The way of life differs among humans and the best way for me is to live an active and full life by doing favorite hobbies such as swimming, drawing and cooking away from feeling tired or lazy and doing chores from school or homework without delaying work in my opinion. Working in this style is preferred for me because of the activity in carrying out and continuing the work, The best thing to do is to do sports at least four times a week to stimulate the blood circulation in the body and thus feel active.
I prefer The way of life differs among humans and the best way for me is to
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an active and full life by doing favorite hobbies such as swimming, drawing and cooking away from feeling tired or lazy and doing chores from school or homework without delaying work in my opinion. Working in this style
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of the activity in carrying out and continuing the work, The best thing to do is to do sports at least four times a week to stimulate the blood circulation in the body and
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feel active.
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IELTS essay Which way of life do you prefer?

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98 words
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