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Which one is better learning through Books or experiences?

Which one is better learning through Books or experiences? lj17J
Books are the important source of the knowledge. We learn basics of all the subjects from the books only. Many people may disagree with the statement that learning through experience is better than learning through experience. Generally speaking, I utterly concur that learning through experience is better and a person learn more by personal experiences than going through books. First, books can give us basic understanding about anything but we can understand that completely after actual experience only. For instance, if I want to learn driving I can get knowledge of traffic rules and differ. . .
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IELTS essay Which one is better learning through Books or experiences?

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