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In your opinion teaching fact or concept(idea) is important to teach student. Which one is better and why?

In your opinion teaching fact or concept(idea) is important to teach student. Which one is better and why? oRD63
learning and teaching are the prosess that most of us go through one of them or both of them. All of teachers in the world want to teach their students in best way; they may teach their studenr by making the student only undrstand the idea and consept of the subject, or they may only want to teach them facts. From my personal experience of being student and teacher I think its best to teach the student the idea and concept at first after that conect it to the fact in the live because of those reasons First of all, Most of the student when they come to school, they already know about most of the facts in the life, so there is no need to describe it again. For example the fact that sun rise at east if I tell the student that they say that they already knew it. So there is no need for teching facts because they will learn it from their natural life. However if I don't teach them the idea that been in the book or in any other resources, it will be a problem because by understanding the idea, they will knew why this idea came. For instance I will tell my student the idea of solving a math problem and I will explain where the ruler came from. As a result of that they can use those idea in actual life. In conclusion, for me understanding the idea and consept is more important than learning facts. From in what I went through of process of teaching and learning Idiscovered that.
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prosess
that most of us go through one of them or both of them.
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students
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way; they may
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their
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studenr
by making the
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student
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only
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undrstand
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idea
and
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consept
of the subject, or they may
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only
want to
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teach
them facts. From my personal experience of being
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student
and teacher I
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think
its best to
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teach
the
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student
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idea
and concept at
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after that
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conect
it to the
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fact
in the
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live
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because
of those
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reasons


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First of all
, Most of the
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student
when they
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come
to school, they already know about most of the facts in the life,
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so
there is no need to
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describe
it again.
For example
the
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fact
that sun rise at east if I
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tell
the
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student
that they say that they already knew it.
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So
there is no need for
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teching
facts
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because
they will learn it from their natural life.

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However
if I don't
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teach
them the
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idea
that been in the book or in any other resources, it will be a problem
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because
by understanding the
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idea
, they will
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knew
why this
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idea
came. For
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instance I
will
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tell
my
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student
the
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idea
of solving a math problem and I will
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explain
where the ruler came from.
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As
a result of that they can
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those
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idea
in actual life.

In conclusion
, for me understanding the
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idea
and
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consept
is more
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important
than learning facts. From in what I went through of process of teaching and learning
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Idiscovered
that.
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IELTS essay In your opinion teaching fact or concept(idea) is important to teach student. Which one is better and why?

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4 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
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