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Which is more important to you? A job with high salary or a job you enjoy.

Which is more important to you? A job with high salary or a job you enjoy. gq623
In today's society, having a job with a high salary is almost the desire of any student. But do we wonder if we don't have a passion for that job, is the high salary enough to make us enthusiastic when working? Left to me it is more important to do a job that I love than a job with high salary but lack of passion. Working is a lifetime thing, a day has 24 hours you have spent at least 8 hours at work so why would you choose a boring job to kill that precious human time of your life? Just because of the high salary? Of course, the worry of money is a problem that everyone encounters, choosing a job you don't love with a high salary is sometimes a must. In my opinion, happiness in human life is when we can pursue our passions and hobbies. Choose a job you love that will make you smile from the beginning to the end. Love is also a prerequisite for us to be enthusiastic about the work we choose. If you love your job, you will be more successful in life and career. At this age, when I don't have too many material burdens, I find it absolutely right to choose to do a job that I love rather than a job with a high salary but lack of passion. In conclusion, I think that between choosing a high paying job that you don't like and a low paying job that you like depends a lot on your thoughts and circumstances. Choose carefully to live life to the fullest.
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IELTS essay Which is more important to you? A job with high salary or a job you enjoy.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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