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whether organic food is worth-eating or not despite its cost thus this essay will clarify both sides before forming my personal opinion.

whether organic food is worth-eating or not despite its cost thus this essay will clarify both sides before forming my personal opinion. On the one hand, the majority of consumers decide to buy the amount of traditional food on the account of providing as a catalyst for tremendous economical with employees do not have enough money. Furthermore, classic foods are sold everywhere such as supermarket, outdoor market and so on that is reason why people could purchase easier and save time to find out something, especially the food items are extremely multi-form to reasonable choose to provide nutrition from the difference in food source. However, the qualities of them are not examined carefully before publishing the market so nobody could ensure about the safety level, there by the foodstuff is reported that it contain GMO (genetically modified organism) or any elements chemical of toxic such chemical pesticides or chemical fertilizers which cause bad effects to the public’s healthy. On the other hand, many experts researched the way to lessen the foreign chemical and give comprehensive merits for well-being which is organic foods. At a glance, it is evident that the basic foods are GMO free, that is, they are not genetically engineered in nature because they are processed through strict standards and high required before being ingested lead to portion of the population could completely believe to use them. More beneficially, the organic food contribute to more intake of nutritionally advantageous antioxidants include prevention of damage disease attack such as cancer, vision problem but the non-organic does not have. By contrast, although the buyers has pay a huge budget for them that could be double than the traditional food, they find it worth- consuming to protect their healthy. In conclusion, organic foods outweigh foodstuff as a result of seeming to be trend hence the locals tend to buy the organic food more than others but it depends on personal financial condition. Personally, I opined that the organic food could give an huge number of benefits more drammatical than conventional food
whether
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organic
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food
is worth-eating or not despite its cost
thus
this essay will clarify both sides
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before
forming my personal opinion.

On the one hand, the majority of consumers decide to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the amount of traditional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
on the account of providing as a catalyst for tremendous economical with employees do not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
money.
Furthermore
, classic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
are sold
everywhere such as supermarket, outdoor market and
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so
on
that is
reason why
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people
could
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purchase
easier and save time to find out something,
especially
the
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food
items are
extremely
multi-form to reasonable choose to provide nutrition from the difference in
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food
source.
However
, the qualities of them are not examined
carefully
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
publishing the market
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
nobody could ensure about the safety level, there by the foodstuff
is reported
that it contain GMO (
genetically
modified organism) or any elements
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chemical
of toxic such
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chemical
pesticides or
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chemical
fertilizers which cause
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
effects to the public’s healthy.

On the other hand
,
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many
experts researched the way to lessen the foreign
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chemical
and give comprehensive merits for well-being which is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
. At a glance, it is evident that the basic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
are GMO free,
that is
, they are not
genetically
engineered in nature
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
are processed
through strict standards and high required
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
being ingested
lead to portion of the population could completely believe to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
them. More
beneficially
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
contribute to more intake of
nutritionally
advantageous antioxidants include prevention of damage disease attack such as cancer, vision problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the non-organic does not have. By contrast, although the buyers has pay a huge budget for them that could be double than the traditional
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food
, they find it worth- consuming to protect their healthy.

In conclusion
,
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organic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
outweigh foodstuff
as a result
of seeming to be trend
hence
the locals tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
more than others
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it depends on personal financial condition.
Personally
, I opined that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
could give an huge number of benefits more drammatical than conventional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
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IELTS essay whether organic food is worth-eating or not despite its cost thus this essay will clarify both sides before forming my personal opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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