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when you tried something but unforunately fail

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failure and success is part and partial of life moreover failure occurs everyday in school, work, families so today i would take this apportunity to talk about the tale of my failure attempt. It was month of august. I am a horticulturist and love to grow various kind of flower and vegetables. i have two huge garden in my house one is kitchen and other one front yard. in last year me and my husband decided to make the front yard more attactive its give effective look to my house my home town is near harike patan hairke patak have huge variety of plants so we buy and fit all in my front yard its take to much time and efforts the garden look to much attractive but in next day due to monsoon the rain was started falling continously 4to 5 days the garden totally demolished and i fell unhappy with this. In the end i would just say that failure is key of succesness

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 and success is part and partial of life moreover
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 and fit all in my front yard its take Did you mean "too"?too
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 much time and efforts the garden look Did you mean "too"?too
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 much attractive This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 day due to monsoon the rain was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
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continously
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 fell unhappy with this. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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