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Describe a school you attended

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I want to talk about my elementary school, which is very close to my home. It takes about 10 minutes from my home to the school. In Vietnam, we went to primary school when we were 6 years old, and the same thing happened to me. It was a wonderful school for me. The teachers were wonderful, lovely teachers and I love most of them. Although the infrastructure of the school was old and degraded, we still had a clean situation for studying and playing. Because of ancient space, we had a lot of mysterious places to play hide and seek. I had many close friends and we had strong relationships more than my classmates in high school. All teachers were completely close with students. They encouraged us to reach our full potential and spark our imagination, so we all respected our teachers. I achieved some prizes for an excellent student contest. I love my school because all my special memories were there. It's kinda unforgettable experienced when I was a child.
I want to talk about my elementary
school
, which is
very
close to my home. It takes about 10 minutes from my home to the
school
. In Vietnam, we went to primary
school
when we were 6 years
old
, and the same thing happened to me. It was a wonderful
school
for me. The
teachers
were wonderful, lovely
teachers
and I
love
most of them. Although the infrastructure of the
school
was
old
and degraded, we
still
had a clean situation for studying and playing.
Because
of ancient space, we had
a lot of
mysterious places to play
hide and seek
. I had
many
close
friends and
we had strong relationships more than my classmates in high
school
. All
teachers
were completely close with students. They encouraged us to reach our full potential and spark our imagination,
so
we all respected our
teachers
. I achieved
some
prizes for an excellent student contest. I
love
my
school
because
all my special memories were there. It's kinda unforgettable experienced when I was a child.
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IELTS essay Describe a school you attended

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
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