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When people live in foreign country , they should follow local customs. Do you agree or not?

When people live in foreign country, they should follow local customs. Do you agree or not? gqbo7
It is undeniable that people migrate to other countries in search of a better life. However, a number of people assert that immigrants should adopt the cultural standards of the host country. This essay will argue why taking a part of new country’s conventional activities is extremely necessary, despite some potential risk of losing a line with one’s own culture. On the one hand, to be respectable towards the cultural norms and traditional events of migrating country is an absolutely urgent. Thereby, immigrants tend to choose the option to improve the understanding with the community of their current homeland and it could be possible when they will create their interest among the culture and tradition of the host country. Finally. Cultural differences could be overcome at a large extent when people start building relations with the citizens of another nationality. Indeed, there have been several recorded incidents of people who migrate from various countries of the world to the USA have been celebrating USA Independence Day without any concern. These few records make it clear that in order to assimilate in another country it is quite vital to being involved in its customs. In spite of this, it is justified that to follow the alternative nation’s culture has the benefits, on the contrary at a same time one’s own culture might be on the verge of being vanished. Even though, it is considerable to attract towards the traditional activities of another culture, but it is enormously required to get involved in own cultural roots. It is seen that due to the influence of other country culture people sometimes abandoned their own cultural standards. For example, one research suggests that a major part of youngsters who starts living in foreign countries indulge with that country culture and considered their own traditions and culture very dull and boring. Overall, it is a worthwhile to preserve one’s own cultural dignity while living in another country of the globe. In conclusion, people who are in favor to be the part of another country culture have an entire understanding that this participation could be fruitful for the survival in a different country.
It is undeniable that
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people
migrate to other
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countries
in search of a better life.

However
, a number of
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people
assert that immigrants should adopt the
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cultural
standards of the host
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country
. This essay will argue why taking a part of new
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country’s
conventional activities is
extremely
necessary, despite
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some
potential
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risk
of losing a line with one’s
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own
culture.

On the one hand, to be respectable towards the
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cultural
norms and traditional
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events
of migrating
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country
is an
absolutely
urgent. Thereby, immigrants tend to choose the option to
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improve
the understanding with the community of their
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current
homeland and it could be possible when they will create their interest among the
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culture
and tradition of the host
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country
.
Finally
.
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Cultural
differences could
be overcome
at a large extent when
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people
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start
building relations with the citizens of another nationality.
Indeed
, there have been several recorded incidents of
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people
who migrate from various
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countries
of the world to the USA have been celebrating USA Independence Day without any concern. These few records
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make
it
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clear
that in order to assimilate in another
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country
it is quite vital to
being involved
in its customs.

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In spite of
this, it
is justified
that to follow the alternative nation’s
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culture
has the benefits,
on the contrary
at a same time one’s
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own
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culture
might be on the verge of
being vanished
.
Even though
, it is considerable to attract towards the traditional activities of another
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culture
,
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but
it is
enormously
required to
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get
involved in
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own
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cultural
roots. It is
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seen
that due to the influence of other
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country
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culture
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people
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sometimes
abandoned their
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own
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cultural
standards.
For example
, one research suggests that a major part of youngsters who
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starts
living in foreign
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countries
indulge with that
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country
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culture
and considered their
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own
traditions and
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culture
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very
dull and boring.
Overall
, it is a worthwhile to preserve one’s
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own
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cultural
dignity while living in another
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country
of the globe.

In conclusion
,
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people
who are in favor to be the part of another
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country
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culture
have an entire understanding that this participation could be fruitful for the survival in a
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different
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country
.
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IELTS essay When people live in foreign country, they should follow local customs. Do you agree or not?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
357 words
6.5
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