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when it comes to educational methods, opinions are various from one person to another person.

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when it comes to educational methods, opinions are various from one person to another person. several experts offer three solutions including focusing on student future, helping to solve scholars problems, and boosting self-study ability. although these perspectives are in turn merit I think that the first selection stands out as an important place. I will elaborate on my reason in the following paragraphs. to begin with, emphasizing the future have a competitive edge. obviously, the goal of learning is finding a good job after graduation. . according to fierce competition in the job market, students have a desperate need to guide what skills and abilities should learn to be more employable. the teachers are competent candidates because they are the closest people to the student that see their education performance. it not only give job opportunity for them in the coming years but it also leads to deal with challenges and obstacles that may be faced future. since the high school period is a sensitive time that people have enough energy to attempt for achieving their goals if the teacher properly guides them, paves the route to realize potential and expand horizons of view. for instance, I tended to work in the international market, but I did not know what I do. my teacher guided me to learn the English language. it is extremely beneficial for me. because it gave me an opportunity to find a good occupation next years. besides, another reason that I think that teachers should focus on undergraduates' future life is that they will interest in academic material. as we all know, students can only enable to listen to their own teacher's lecture for a short time. if educators just teach theoretical material, they distract and they learn no valuable skills. admittedly,

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