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When in Rome do as the Romans do

When in Rome do as the Romans do 789b
This proverb means that whenever you go, you should act politely and respect local customs and tradinitions, and act as people are acting in this place. The knowledge about foreign countries, their culture, brings many benefits to the immigrants. They know the positive things that are allowed to do there and negative ones that should be avoided. Following the local culture when you're abroad is a mark of respect and has many benefits. Integrating with locals is a great way to make friends, find a good job, learn about local life. Unfortunately, we can't learn everything and sometimes may act awkwardly, or even more may find yourself in deep trouble, in such situations as: a woman in a bikini on the streets of Saudi Arabia, or a person from a country where the weed is legalised in an East Asian countrys found in possession of marijuana, where the death penalty could apply, etc. And this is just one small example which shows that our customs are different from others.
This proverb means that whenever you go, you should act
politely
and respect
local
customs and
tradinitions
, and act as
people
are acting in this place. The knowledge about foreign countries, their culture, brings
many
benefits to the immigrants. They know the
positive
things that are
allowed
to do there and
negative
ones that should
be avoided
. Following the
local
culture when you're abroad is a mark of respect and has
many
benefits. Integrating with
locals
is a great way to
make
friends, find a
good
job, learn about
local
life. Unfortunately, we can't learn everything and
sometimes
may act
awkwardly
, or even more may find yourself in deep trouble, in such situations as: a woman in a bikini on the streets of Saudi Arabia, or a person from a country where the weed is
legalised
in an East Asian
countrys
found in possession of marijuana, where the death penalty could apply, etc. And this is
just
one
small
example which
shows
that our customs are
different
from others.
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IELTS essay When in Rome do as the Romans do

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
169 words
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