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In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, university or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, university or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? rqgL

While it is true that living youngsters with their parents is quite common in some of three nations even after completing the higher education and finding job. I opined that positive impacts outshines the negative impacts. Plethora of benefits are there of this trend. Most important is that children can contribute towards the household income and can share expenses which assists in the reduction of burden on those members who earn money. This development not only helps them in this way but also assist them in saving of money rather than struggling to pay rents and take care of other expenses. So, they can do saving for their lives

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important
 is that children can contribute towards the household income and can share expenses which assists in the reduction of burden on those members who earn money. This development not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 than struggling to pay rents and take care of other expenses. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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