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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration

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Today people can acquire information about when selecting a occupation the earning money is the most essential consedration. I am absolutely agreement with this notion which is going to be explained by adding some reason from my view. To the best of my thinking is that job of choice play vital role of in our life. To my mind, every thing are relate with salary so that a number of people really want to find big salary. Because individuals should supply their children and who ought to acquire luxurious house. Although they suffer different problem do not stop working. If people one crucial job, who will care to taken income. One of the largest example is that children are provided by their parents. This situation may affect children's education. It is first point of worth mentaining is that an excellent choice for job is key every facilities, consequently people will be society's members. Moreover, usuful contribution is given by member of society. Taking one instance to my opinion is that this way help to build comfortable road, a quantity of chariety and another things. Salary is given by government so which is important for government and local people. Taking everything into consedration is that I can say that without any hesitation is that most people want to enough money in job selection, so choosing a job and find more income are preferable for every people, because choice of career impact on considerably to our future
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and find more income are preferable for every
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IELTS essay When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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