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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. with this opinion. Q0X9
It is correctly said that “Trees cannot stand strong without roots”, similarly, we can not make pur future without history. While enhancing a nation’s technology, the cultural skills and ways of living ruin. It is important to keep them alive. Before any contradictions, both the views and opinions will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs. At the very outset, a very famous quote says that we should preserve history to pass on to the next generation. It is necessary that our youth should know about the past events happened in our country. Every culture have their own erstwhile situations and without history it makes us feel like orphans. Other major reason for keeping out historical skills alive is more employment opportunities. I deem that a healthy body lives in healthy mind. In earlier time, all works were done by hand, which helped in maintaining the physical and mental fitness. To exemplify, nowadays there are various kinds of machinery which work fustily and efficiently. People do their small works with the help of electronic gadgets like chopping, cutting etcetera, which is turning our future into digital world. It is also creating unemployment and in-turn lowering the living standards. Moving ahead, our hoary events give us comparisons to take right decisions in the coming times. Our ancestors make us feel patriotic and also inherit the emotional values in us. On the flip side, change are inevitable part of life. As advancements in technology is the best transformation for our bright future. Mechanisation is helping us in all the working areas. Any kind of development is directly related to the growth of nation. Either it is related to medication, infrastructure, transportation etcetera. Advancement made a smooth road towards the growth of the country.  To sum and substance, we can not expect a clap with one hand only so is the scenario with history and future. Both are like the banks of a river that move separately but parallel to each other.
It is
correctly
said that “Trees cannot stand strong without roots”,
similarly
, we can not
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make
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pur
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future
without
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history
. While enhancing a nation’s technology, the cultural
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skills
and ways of living ruin. It is
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important
to
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keep
them alive.
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Before
any contradictions, both the views and opinions will
be discussed
in the forthcoming paragraphs.

At the
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very
outset, a
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very
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famous
quote says that we should preserve
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history
to pass on to the
next
generation. It is necessary that our youth should know about the past
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events
happened in our country. Every culture have
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their
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own
erstwhile situations and without
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history
it
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makes
us feel like orphans. Other major reason for keeping out historical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
alive is more employment opportunities. I deem that a healthy body
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
in healthy mind. In earlier time, all works
were done
by hand, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
in maintaining the physical and mental fitness. To exemplify, nowadays there are various kinds of machinery which work
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fustily
and
efficiently
.
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People
do their
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small
works with the
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help
of electronic gadgets like chopping, cutting etcetera, which is turning our
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future
into digital world. It is
also
creating unemployment and in-turn lowering the living standards. Moving ahead, our hoary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
give us comparisons to take right decisions in the coming times. Our ancestors
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
us feel patriotic and
also
inherit the emotional values in us. On the flip side,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
are inevitable part of life. As advancements in technology is the best transformation for our bright
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
.
Possible spelling mistake. 'Mechanisation' is British English.
Mechanisation
is helping us in all the working areas. Any kind of development is
directly
related to the growth of nation. Either it
is related
to medication, infrastructure, transportation etcetera. Advancement made a smooth road towards the growth of the country.  To sum and substance, we can not
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expect
a clap with one hand
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only
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so
is the scenario with
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history
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. Both are like the banks of a river that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
separately
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but
parallel to each other.
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IELTS essay When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. with this opinion.

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