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what you think abou a bad condition

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In todays society their are different kind of people with different opinions. Some think it is better to go on and accept what is happening with then like an unsatisfactory job or a bad condition but on another hand many people have positive attitude and try to improve the situation. Those individuals who accept the dilemma they are stuck in are right at their place because that gives them a reality check and something is better than nothing. It will give them more power to deal with its repercussion. Also, then they have to go on with many problems For example if a person is doing a less paid job then it will not help him as he will not get more money to fulfill his wishes. on the other hand, a person who tries to improve that situation is going on a right path because at the end they have tried and they will get fruits for what they have done. It is always good to improve situation rather than agreeing on a non happy job.
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IELTS essay what you think abou a bad condition

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
177 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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