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What would you like to gift to child

What would you like to gift to child r13g2
WelI i would like to give her a piece of art. Commencing with, a piece of painting will give the children a deeper insight into history and culture. They will gain a good sense of culture and customs and it's usually more interesting compared to the reading. It can't be argued that world needs artists. This is good to be mentioned that this piece of art will help to stimulate children's artistic intelligence while helping them to be mentally and emotionally stable. It should be considered that this kind of art provide them with a break from unnecessary subjects. I want to share my experience
WelI
i
would like to give her a piece of art.

Commencing with, a piece of painting will give the children a deeper insight into history and culture. They will gain a
good
sense of culture and customs and it's
usually
more interesting compared to the reading. It can't
be argued
that world needs artists. This is
good
to
be mentioned
that this piece of art will
help
to stimulate children's artistic intelligence while helping them to be mentally and
emotionally
stable. It should
be considered
that this kind of art provide them with a break from unnecessary subjects. I want to share my
experience
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IELTS essay What would you like to gift to child

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
104 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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