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what should she do if she has a picnic with her friend. Bring a bread, a camera or books

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If I were her, I would like to choose bread. I will mention my reasons. First, it's more suitable than numerous books. In fact, there is a picnic, so she should spend more time with her friends to makes many memories or dives into the natural instead of learning a lot of abstract knowledge in books. At the same time, bringing bread will help her to feel full, especially she is able to share it with friends during the trip. I won't choose to bring a camera due to the fact it's unnecessary. For taking photos, she can use her phone. Moreover, she hasn't any cameras, so borrowing form someone makes she shy. In conclusion, I decide to choose the third solution in this case.

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