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describe education in the future

describe education in the future 3Yql5
As technology is rapidly changing the world around us, we should expect the impact of technology on education, it will take up different forms include such as reforms in teaching methods and learning at diverse times and places. In the section on changes in teaching methods, I can give the example of training by robots that have artificial intelligence, they will adjust the teaching method according to the person's abilities and teach everyone according to the person's level and compatible with their abilities, will diminish the number of people losing their confidence about their abilities, in addition, in this way, people can clearly see what they are talented in which areas. In addition, in the discussion of learning at different times and places, we have advantages such as more opportunities to learn, because instead of a set time to train everyone, students can be trained at their own time, also eLearning tools facilitate for remote, self-paced learning and this way students can receive education in another country and do not have to spend it in their own country, This makes the level of education international and removes borders. In the end, it is an undeniable fact technology will have a big impact on education, and has achievements to promote education, And that it can be used for the improvement of education.
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rapidly
changing the world around us, we should
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the impact of technology on
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education
, it will take up
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different
forms include such as reforms in teaching methods and learning at diverse
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times
and places.

In the section on
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changes
in teaching methods, I can give the example of training by robots that have artificial intelligence, they will adjust the teaching method according to the person's abilities and teach everyone according to the person's level and compatible with their abilities, will diminish the number of
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people
losing their confidence about their abilities,
in addition
, in this way,
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people
can
clearly
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see
what they
are talented
in which areas.

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different
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times
and places, we have advantages such as more opportunities to learn,
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instead
of a set
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time
to train everyone, students can
be trained
at their
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eLearning
tools facilitate for remote, self-paced learning and this way students can receive
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education
in another country and do not
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have to
spend it in their
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own
country, This
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makes
the level of
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education
international and removes borders.

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In
the
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end
, it is an undeniable fact technology will have a
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big
impact on
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education
, and has achievements to promote
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education
, And that it can be
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used
for the improvement of
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education
.
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IELTS essay describe education in the future

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
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