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What should a government do fora country to become successful?

What should a government do fora country to become successful? Dl7Ym
These days, there are a lot of poor countries which need help to become successful. So what steps can the government take for the homeland to achieve a feat? Well, there are numerous ways that can be done by the government to develop the country which will be discussed in this essay. First and foremost, the government should provide their citizens with some basic needs such as food medical care and education. The good education system has a big impact on society because only with literate professionals we can raise the level of wealth in our country. Moreover, by encouraging people to eat healthily, do some exercises we can prevent some diseases so that the government do not need to spend much time and also money to hospitalize patients. In addition, the government should provide their native land with modern technologies because, without proper investment in the future, any country can be highly developed. Furthermore, one more thing on which government must put attention on the practice of law which gives citizens a safe and comfortable feeling because without living in a safe and sound place in result they will move abroad. For instance, people in Ukraine move to foreign countries to find a better life without war and live in justice and also find the prestigious job that will give them opportunities and will increase their level of life. So providing a safety system would be one of the most significant for the country to be wealthy. In conclusion, even though governments take a vital role in the developing country people should also work hard for themselves, for their family, for society and for the country as well to achieve success.
These days, there are
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poor
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countries
which need
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help
to become successful.
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So
what steps can the
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government
take for the homeland to achieve a feat? Well, there are numerous ways that can
be done
by the
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government
to develop the
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country
which will
be discussed
in this essay.

First
and foremost, the
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government
should provide their citizens with
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some
basic needs such as food medical care and education. The
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good
education system has a
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big
impact on society
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because
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only
with literate professionals we can raise the level of wealth in our
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country
.
Moreover
, by encouraging
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people
to eat
healthily
, do
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some
exercises we can
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prevent
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some
diseases
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so
that the
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government
do not need to spend much time and
also
money to hospitalize patients.

In addition
, the
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government
should provide their native land with modern technologies
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because
, without proper investment in the future, any
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country
can be
highly
developed.
Furthermore
, one more thing on which
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government
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must
put attention on the practice of law which gives citizens a safe and comfortable feeling
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because
without living in a safe and sound place in result they will
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move
abroad.
For instance
,
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people
in Ukraine
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move
to foreign
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countries
to find a better life without war and
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live
in justice and
also
find the prestigious job that will give them opportunities and will increase their level of life.
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So
providing a safety system would be one of the most significant for the
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country
to be wealthy.

In conclusion
,
even though
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governments
take a vital role in the developing
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country
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people
should
also
work
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hard
for themselves, for their family, for society and for the
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country
as well
to achieve success.
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IELTS essay What should a government do fora country to become successful?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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