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to prevent novel coronavirus and protect ourselves?

to prevent novel coronavirus and protect ourselves? kYL22
Let me give you some advice. Firstly, we should avoid going outside, and should only stay at home because It is safe to stay at home. Secondly, if sometimes we have to go out to run some errands, we must wear a protective mask. Thirdly, we should wash our hands frequently, do regular exercise and take plenty of rest. These measures can certainly boost our immunity and help us develop some good habits.
Let
me give you
some
advice.
Firstly
, we should avoid going outside, and should
only
stay at home
because
It is safe to stay at home.
Secondly
, if
sometimes
we
have to
go out to run
some
errands, we
must
wear a protective mask.
Thirdly
, we should wash our hands
frequently
, do regular exercise and take
plenty
of rest.

These measures can
certainly
boost our immunity and
help
us develop
some
good
habits.
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IELTS essay to prevent novel coronavirus and protect ourselves?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
73 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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