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what kind of accomodation do you live in and who do you live with and how long

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Well, I have been living in a three- storey house in an alley for over two years with my family. It is a house which is filled with plants and bonsai trees from the courtyard to the backyard and from the first floor to the third floor. Because it was located next to the roadside, my old accommodation was very noisy and uncomfortable. moreover, it's small, mysterious and uncertain because it was built a long time ago
Well, I have been living in a three-
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storey
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house
in an alley for over two years with my family. It is a
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house
which
is filled
with plants and bonsai trees from the courtyard to the backyard and from the
first
floor to the third floor.
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Because
it
was located
next
to the roadside, my
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old
accommodation was
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very
noisy and uncomfortable.
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moreover
, it's
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small
, mysterious and uncertain
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because
it
was built
a long time ago

IELTS essay what kind of accomodation do you live in and who do you live with and how long

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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