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What is your favorite clothe and colour?

One of the most clothes that I usually wear in each season is shirt and Jeans. I choose a different shirt with colour mates Jeans. I set the colour of my Jeans with a shirt, I wear Jeans at work, university, home, etc. I don`t buy brand Jeans; I usually buy it from Azerbaijan; It is the price is affordable and cheap, Also, its quality is good. I usually ware in blue Jeans. I can wear them for a long time. Jeans lifetime is more than other trousers. Jeans usually stretch to the body, therefor people that have not good body shape, it is not good for those people to wear Jeans.
One of the most clothes that I
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in each season is shirt and Jeans. I choose a
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shirt with
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colour
mates Jeans. I set the
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colour
of my Jeans with a shirt, I
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Jeans at work, university, home, etc.
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I
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don`t
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brand Jeans; I
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usually
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it from Azerbaijan; It is the price is affordable and
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,
Also
, its quality is
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good
.
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usually ware
in blue Jeans.
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can
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them for a long time. Jeans lifetime is more than other trousers. Jeans
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stretch to the body, therefor
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people
that have not
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body shape, it is not
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for those
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IELTS essay What is your favorite clothe and colour?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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