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What is your about distance learning over the internet?

It is a well-known fact that internet has changed our lives for the past few years. We can determine this change in education too as nowadays it is feasible that students can take their lessons from distance. I believe that distance learning do not provide the quality that a regular school does. To start with, studying from distance, except from the fact that learning is not so qualitative; the communication is more difficult as this in a real classroom. What I mean is that there is a high possibility for a student to have a bad internet connection. As a result the student will not be able to attend the class and lose all the notes and information. Continuing, learning from distance can be a very isolating experience. For example, students do not have the advantage of communicating with their friends but only via their phones. This is a very serious fact that schools and universities should pay attention to, otherwise problems may be occurred in the student. Furthermore, because everything happens at a distance, it follows that sharing, borrowing and other such functions, involving paperwork and assignments take more time, so students have less free time to rest or do their hobbies. Moreover, when learners are at a distance teachers’ work becomes more difficult. For example they cannot keep an eye on the learner’s performance and progress. Last but not least distance learning makes relationships more difficult as in many occasions the cameras are closed and there is no face contact between the teacher and the students. To end up I prefer by far classic learning in the school building, and as we do distance learning now because of a virus, I really want to return back to school to see my friends and teachers again.
It is a well-known fact that
internet has
changed
our
lives
for the past few years. We can determine this
change
in education too as nowadays it is feasible that
students
can take their lessons from
distance
. I believe that
distance
learning
do
not provide the quality that a regular
school
does.

To
start
with, studying from
distance
, except from the fact that
learning
is not
so
qualitative; the communication is more difficult as this in a real classroom. What I mean is that there is a high possibility for a
student
to have a
bad
internet connection.
As a result
the
student
will not be able to attend the
class
and lose all the notes and information. Continuing,
learning
from
distance
can be a
very
isolating experience.
For example
,
students
do not have the advantage of communicating with their friends
but
only
via their phones. This is a
very
serious fact that
schools
and universities should pay attention to,
otherwise
problems may
be occurred
in the student.

Furthermore
,
because
everything happens at a
distance
, it follows that sharing, borrowing and other such functions, involving paperwork and assignments take more time,
so
students
have less free time to rest or do their hobbies.
Moreover
, when learners are at a
distance
teachers’ work becomes more difficult. For
example they
cannot
keep
an eye on the learner’s performance and progress. Last
but
not
least
distance
learning
makes
relationships more difficult as in
many
occasions the cameras
are closed
and there is no face contact between the teacher and the students.

To
end
up I prefer by far classic
learning
in the
school
building, and as we do
distance
learning
now
because
of a virus, I
really
want to
return back
to
school
to
see
my friends and teachers again.
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IELTS essay What is your about distance learning over the internet?

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4 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
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