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What is the importance of cars and airplanes in the modern life?Explain.

What is the importance of cars and airplanes in the modern life? Explain. 1o2nX
I would say that it is unimagiable without the cars and airplanes in the modern life. It is a fact to have those kinds of vehicles in this developing life. First of all, we could go from one place to another in the city and visit everywhere in the country by belonging our own vehicle. It is true that each person cosumes their own cars instead of using the pubic transportation, which can more populate the environment. For this case, some people who live near their work should consider using public transport but for some commmuters must use their own vehicles while the buses and trains might not be convenient and safe at all for them which can take time and far more tiring. Similarly, some families who are fond of traveling in only the local places, rather be happy and fun in using their own vehicles and feel like more private than using the express. Hence, some affordable humans, the commuters, business people having most of time going around need to have at least one car for transportation and cars are partially important. Likewise, airplanes must be as equal important as the cars. There is no tourism and no global trade without the airplanes. The people can't visit to another country for a journey or studies and this will lead to a lack of tourism, that can even a disaster to ruin the country. Regarding no immigration, we could feel like stucking in the dark world. Moreover, there is a decline of economic which can make the world poor and even the people will be a lack of food. In a conclusion, if we want to develop a modern world, it is a must to be perfect in every field. We should not avoid consuming those vechiles in order to reduce the serious pollution. The cars and airplanes are the vital connection of one spot to another.
I would say that it is
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unimagiable
without the
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cars
and
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airplanes
in the modern life. It is a fact to have those kinds of
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vehicles
in this developing life.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, we could go from one place to another in the city and visit everywhere in the country by belonging our
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own
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vehicle
. It is true that each person
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cosumes
their
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own
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cars
instead
of using the
Did you mean "public"?
pubic
transportation, which can more populate the environment. For this case,
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some
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people
who
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live
near their work should consider using public transport
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but
for
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some
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commmuters
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must
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use
their
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own
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vehicles
while the buses and trains might not be convenient and safe at all for them which can take time and far more tiring.
Similarly
,
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some
families who are fond of traveling in
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only
the local places,
rather
be happy and fun in using their
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own
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vehicles
and feel like more private than using the express.
Hence
,
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some
affordable humans, the commuters, business
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people
having
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most of time
going around need to have at least one
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car
for transportation and
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cars
are
partially
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important
.
Likewise
,
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airplanes
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must
be as equal
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important
as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
. There is no tourism and no global trade without the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airplanes
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can't visit to another country for a journey or studies and this will lead to a lack of tourism, that can even a disaster to ruin the country. Regarding no immigration, we could feel like
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stucking
in the dark world.
Moreover
, there is a decline of economic which can
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make
the world poor and even the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will be a lack of food. In a conclusion, if we want to develop a modern world, it is a
After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.
must to
be perfect in every field. We should not avoid consuming those
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vechiles
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the serious pollution. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
and
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airplanes
are the vital connection of one spot to another.
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IELTS essay What is the importance of cars and airplanes in the modern life? Explain.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
318 words
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