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What is the impacts of global warming on our planet? What should we do to deal with this issue?

What is the impacts of global warming on our planet? What should we do to deal with this issue? LrLPR
Nowadays, climate change is becoming one of the most remarkable problem all over the world. The impacts of climate change have threatened to not only human being but also the wildlife and the planet. This emergecy situation requires human have more solutions to reduce its negative consequences. The world is becoming worse because of global warming. Many evidences show that human activities is the main cause of global warming such as burning fossil fuels, cutting down trees excessively, detroying the wildlife, etc. These activities lead to a range of serious impacts. They affect our planet's weather and climate system. In recent years, weather and climate have shifted unusually. The climate becomes hotter day by day. The weather is changeable. In addition, this unusual situation changing has threatened to the wildlife populations and habitats resulting in the disappearance of a variety of species. If this situation continues happening, ecosystem will be destroys and human will be at risk of extinction. The global warming also affects human health negatively. Many serious diseases have been recognised and they continues increasing threatening human being. Besides that, human have to face with many other impacts. Global warming becomes more serious day by day. This situation requires human take many solutions to prevent it and there will be no magic bullet. The most effective way recognised that is protecting forests and planting more trees as much as possible. Plants and forests have a great power to help the atmosphere fresher and cleaner. The next way used in many countries that is being smart in using resources. Many scientists suggest using renewable energy such as biofuels, wind or solar energy, etc instead of using fossil fuels, the main cause lead to global warming. Some countries use strict policies to prevent negative activies leading global warming. Besides that, these countries also conduct a campaign to raise awareness of global warming. Global warming has threatened to not only human being but also the planet and it become more serious. For that reason, human have to take action as soon as possible.
Nowadays,
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climate
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change
is becoming one of the most remarkable problem all over the world. The impacts of
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climate
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change
have threatened to not
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only
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human
being
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but
also
the wildlife and the planet. This
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emergecy
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situation
requires
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human
have more solutions to
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reduce
its
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negative
consequences.

The world is becoming worse
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of
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global
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warming
.
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evidences
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show
that
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human
activities is the main cause of
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global
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warming
such as burning fossil fuels, cutting down trees
excessively
,
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detroying
the wildlife, etc. These activities lead to a range of
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serious
impacts. They affect our planet's weather and
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climate
system. In recent years, weather and
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climate
have shifted
unusually
. The
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climate
becomes hotter day by day. The weather is changeable.
In addition
, this unusual
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situation
changing has threatened to the wildlife populations and habitats resulting in the disappearance of a variety of species. If this
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situation
continues happening, ecosystem will be
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destroys
and
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human
will be at
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risk
of extinction. The
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global
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warming
also
affects
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human
health
negatively
.
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Many
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serious
diseases have been
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recognised and
they
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continues
increasing threatening
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being.
Besides
that,
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face with
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many
other impacts.

Global
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warming
becomes more
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serious
day by day. This
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situation
requires
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human
take
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many
solutions to
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prevent
it and there will be no magic bullet. The most effective way
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recognised
that is
protecting forests and planting more trees as much as possible. Plants and forests have a great power to
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help
the atmosphere fresher and cleaner. The
next
way
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used
in
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countries
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being smart in using resources.
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scientists suggest using renewable energy such as biofuels, wind or solar energy, etc
instead
of using fossil fuels, the main cause lead to
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global
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warming
.
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Some
countries
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use
strict policies to
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prevent
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negative
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activies
leading
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global
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warming
.
Besides
that, these countries
also
conduct a campaign to raise awareness of
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global
warming.

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warming
has threatened to not
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only
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being
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the planet and it
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. For that reason,
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have to
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soon
as possible.
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IELTS essay What is the impacts of global warming on our planet? What should we do to deal with this issue?

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4 paragraphs
342 words
5.5
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