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What is the difference between meals people have today and in the past?

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A big difference between the way people eat today compared with long ago is the work and time needed. For modern families, food and meals are merely an afterthought in the schedule. Two hundred years ago, food and food preparation stood at the center of the family’s daily lifestyle. Without the advances in technology that help us store, preserve, and prepare food, men and women would spend much of their time getting meals ready to eat. The largest difference between foods of today and of a century ago is the amount of processing and additives involved. In the early 1900s, the majority of meals were prepared freshly from raw ingredients, but today, even home-cooked meals may feature pre-made bread, sauces, or other ingredients.
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and women would spend much of their time getting
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and of a century ago is the amount of processing and additives involved. In the early 1900s, the majority of
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IELTS essay What is the difference between meals people have today and in the past?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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