Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Альтернативные источники энергии, использующие естественную силу ветра, волн и солнца, слишком дороги и сложны, чтобы заменить уголь, нефть и газ, которые мы используем для питания наших городов и транспорта

Альтернативные источники энергии, использующие естественную силу ветра, волн и солнца, слишком дороги и сложны, чтобы заменить уголь, нефть и газ, которые мы используем для питания наших городов и транспорта 6aGxB

Non-renewable energy is likely not to be replaced by wind, waves and sun derired energy due to certain reasons, say complexity and price. I partially agree with the current statement, sine some non-developed countries cannot afford to substitute their energy using approad, while safety of renewable energy types along with persistence should be taken into consideration. Renewable energy such as solar, wind and wave energy requires a lot of financial equipment costs, takes up large areas and the efficient operation of the equipment depends on environmental conditions. Solar panels use accumulator installations because they do not periodically generate current. Wind farms, due to their large size, cause death of birds, they have the same principle of operation as solar panels. Unlike non-renewable energy, renewable energy does not harm nature, ecosystems and people. Thanks to them, the ozone layer of the earth is not destroyed and global warming is avoided. Countries such as the USA, Japan, Iceland, China, France, Australia, the Netherlands and other developed countries are gradually switching to Green Energy. Because developed countries, due to their industrial plants, destroy flora, fauna and vast territories. In my opinion, a gradual transition to renewable energy will be an effective solution for all countries. It is better than not switching to Green energy or completely abandoning non-renewable energy.

Non-renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 is likely not to be replaced
 by wind, waves and sun Possible spelling mistake found.deriveddesiredderided
derired
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 due to certain reasons, say complexity and price. I partially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 statement, sine This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 non-developed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 cannot afford to substitute their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 using Possible spelling mistake found.app road
approad
, while safety of renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 types along with persistence should be taken
 into consideration.

Renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 such as solar, wind and wave You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 requires This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 financial equipment costs, takes up large areas and the efficient operation of the equipment depends on environmental conditions. Solar panels This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 accumulator installations This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they do not periodically
 generate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
. Wind farms, due to their large size, cause death of birds, they have the same principle of operation as solar panels.

Unlike non-renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
, renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 does not harm nature, ecosystems and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Thanks to them, the ozone layer of the earth is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 and global warming is avoided
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
Countries
 such as the USA, Japan, Iceland, China, France, Australia, the Netherlands and other developed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 are gradually
 switching to Green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
Energy
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 developed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, due to their industrial plants, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
 flora, fauna and vast territories.

In my opinion, a gradual transition to renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 will be an effective solution for all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. It is better than not switching to Green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 or completely abandoning non-renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
. 