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What is the best age to marry?

What is the best age to marry? RNW3V
There are various factors influencing the age of marriage including people’s characteristics and environmental features and facilities. Otherwise, the most proper ages for this event would be between 25 to 30 years old. The following essay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view. Undoubtedly, the personal desires and objectives can considerably affect people’s attitude towards marriage and consequently the appropriate age for them to marry. For instance, a man who has a penchant for achieving a highly convenient life with high amount of income and luxury propertie. . .
There are various factors influencing the age of marriage including
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people
’s characteristics and environmental features and facilities.
Otherwise
, the most proper ages for this
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event
would be
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between 25 to 30
years
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. The following essay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view.

Undoubtedly
, the personal desires and objectives can
considerably
affect
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people
’s attitude towards marriage and
consequently
the appropriate age for them to marry.
For instance
, a
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man
who has a penchant for achieving a
highly
convenient life with high amount of income and luxury
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IELTS essay What is the best age to marry?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
91 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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