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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Advertising influences people’s behavior in a negative way.

Advertising influences people’s behavior in a negative way. 6xp5K

Since the introduction of technology and broad communications, the growing industry of advertising would be inevitable. Although advertising have some beneficial effects such as introducing new products to the public or increasing buying the products of a company, it can influence people’s notions and tastes about consuming harmfully. The following essay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view. Undoubtedly, advertisement industry has helped people by providing the opportunity of being informed about new products and their features in several ways. One result is that, . . .

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