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Television has had a mostly positive effect on society.

Television has had a mostly positive effect on society. 15mRA

Since the introduction of technology the mass media especially television has advanced enormously. Television incorporates a wide range of various programs which contain any aspects of people’s life. Although there might be some inappropriate programs proclaimed on television, the decent influences of its instructive programs should not be disregarded. The following essay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view. Undoubtedly, some televised programs hold some detrimental effects on human’s characteristic and behaviors. For instance, today the number of violent pro. . .

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