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What is happiness, in your opinion? What can make people happy? Do you think people in your country are happy? Why or why not?

What is happiness, in your opinion? What can make people happy? Do you think people in your country are happy? Why or why not? JLjGk
That’s an interesting question. Personally, I think happiness is a very difficult concept, which everybody chooses for them self because everybody has their own definition of happiness. We cannot describe these feelings. My contention is, happiness is a sense of well-being, joy, or contentment. The feeling that comes when we feel satisfied, fulfilled and we can see it in people’s eyes. Happiness glows from inside of their souls. It's not something concrete, you can't list it with a number or a system. For me, happiness is my life. I enjoy every moment of it. It's having the freedom and opportunity to do what I want. Of course, if I go on to have a career and a family, then I will be very happy. I think everyone has their own interpretation of what happiness is. For one person, perhaps happiness is health, for another it is love or spirit. Some people think that buying a lot of things such as high-end clothing, luxury brands or enjoying delicious food and having a lot of money makes them happy. Others feel happy when we work to achieve our goal for a long time such as graduating from university or getting a good job with well-paid, getting married or starting a family, we feel delight and joy. Or sometimes we feel happiness when we see unbelievable scenery and beautiful buildings. I think that everybody can be a happy person, because everyone has relatives, friends, and opportunities which he can realize in the future. Unfortunately, many people think they are not happy, because they have a lot of problems. We do not remember any good events and things for very long. I believe that all people in the world are happy, but everyone should recall the actions in their lives, which brought them happiness.
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their souls. It's not something concrete, you can't list it with a number or a system. For me,
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is my life. I enjoy every moment of it. It's having the freedom and opportunity to do what I want.
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is health, for another it is
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when we work to achieve our goal for a long time such as graduating from university or getting a
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delight and joy. Or
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IELTS essay What is happiness, in your opinion? What can make people happy? Do you think people in your country are happy? Why or why not?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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