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Are you willing to pay more for a hotel room with a good view?

Are you willing to pay more for a hotel room with a good view? MoOPQ
I think it just really depends on the city. Most of the time, I think of hotel rooms or Airbnb as like simply places to crash, to sleep because the places I usually travel to have so much to offer outside of your hotel room so I usually don’t splurge on a room with a nice view. But if I find myself in a city where there’s not much to do and most of what I’ll be doing during the day is just slouching about in the hotel room then I will pay for an upgrade.
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or Airbnb as like
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places to crash, to sleep
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don’t splurge on a
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with a nice view.
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if I find myself in a city where there’s not much to do and most of what I’ll be doing during the day is
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slouching about in the hotel
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then I will pay for an upgrade.

IELTS essay Are you willing to pay more for a hotel room with a good view?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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