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Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good. ke3BR

To begin that, the one important reason causing people should decide to apply for new career is to face new challenge for developing their abilities and skills. Simply put, getting stuck in one position in the same company, individuals are bound to experience lack of motivation. That is because realizing, they do not have this chance for new tasks and responsibilities and everything is formed such as a routine with no attraction part. Take passionate for carrying out new project as an example; as soon as people change their company, they set to take a responsibilities for various actions and increase the creativity for to be success. People, therefore, can gains invaluable experience and expand the horizon about all aspects of job.

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