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Your definition of happiness

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Happiness definition depends on a person, Some might say being happy requires having financial stability and admirable occupation. The majority of people is not satisfied with their life. Even though some of them are fortunate enough to have a business which worth millions, they always seek for the way to make more. Personally, I have seen many billionaires that were diagnose with mental health conditions such as depression. It is not about the biggest achievement in life that makes people happy, happiness is the little things in everyday life. The main factor that lead to happiness is be grateful for any events that occur in your life, Positive thinking helps. Sometimes making mistake can be a valuable lesson in the future. Achieving a happy life is not as hard as you think.
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happy, happiness is the
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things in everyday life.

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grateful for any
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IELTS essay Your definition of happiness

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
132 words
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