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What have you learnt from movies of different countries?

What have you learnt from movies of different countries? awONG

I have started watching Korean films recently and one thing which I learned from them are about their food and their eating habits. First and foremost, Koreans give importance to food and have a balanced diet throughout their day. They eat a lot of junk or street food which is pretty unhealthy but balance it out by eating a plethora of fruits and vegetables especially exotic ones with high nutritional value. Additionally, they always eat together with their families and sit down on the ground while having their meal. In conclusion, movies do reflect a lot about the cultures and traditions of different countries.

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