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WHAT FORM OF TRANSPORT DO YOU PREFER TO USE? WHY?

WHAT FORM OF TRANSPORT DO YOU PREFER TO USE? WHY? YRrBK
Nowadays, we have many kind of vehicles such as: motorbike; car; bus; truck; bikecycle…and so on. According to using arm, we can choose one or more kind of vehicles. In my point of view, we just buy one kind of vehicles that we need to use to move, not according to our favorite. For me, I choose motorbike to tranfer. Motorbike is the most popular in Vietnam and it is quite easy to use. The first reason that I choose motorbike to tranfer is it make me feel comfortable than another form of transport. When I am sitting in the car with four sides all occult, I feel like a bird is imprisoned in a cage. Instead of that I will ride my motorbike to breath the air clearly, feel the wind blow my hair. Those make me feel like a free bird is flying in the sky. Beside that, when using motorbike I can save a lot of money per year. When using motorbike I don't have to pay tolls and road taxes like when using four-wheel vehicles. I can save a lot of money. For example: The owner of a car must pay about one hundred VND for car fees but it is not when using motorbike. Another example: Car maintenance cost pretty higher than motorbike. The owner has to pay about fifty milions VND car for maintenance cost while the person who riding motorbike just have to pay one third cost. The last reason is I like compactness of motorbike. It is quite easy to find somewhere to park, it can go to narrow street easier. For instance: If you ride a car go to a village, you can go into this village because the way of village is very small. With a motorbike can go in to it because motorbike is smaller than car. Another example: you ride a car to hang out or go to a coffee shop, you must find somewhere that big enough to park. When you hang out with a motorbike, you can eeasier to find a park. To sum up, I think that motorbike is the best vehicle that suit on me. With many benefits like that, would you like to buy a motorbike? I think that in Vietnam, motorbike is the most popular form of transports that used. So that motorcycle exhaust also affects the environment a lot. I think that we must use aromatic gasoline to reduce motorcycle exhaust or in the future, someone will invent a certain fuel that does not pollute the environment.
Nowadays, we have
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on. According to using arm, we can choose one or more kind of
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vehicles
. In my point of view, we
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one kind of
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that we need to
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to
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, not according to our favorite. For me, I choose
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motorbike
to
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tranfer
.
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Motorbike
is the most popular in Vietnam and it is quite easy to
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.

The
first
reason that I choose
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comfortable
than another form of transport. When I am sitting in the
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car
with four sides all occult, I
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feel
like a bird
is imprisoned
in a cage.
Instead
of that I will ride my
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motorbike
to breath the air
clearly
,
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feel
the wind blow my hair. Those
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make
me
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feel
like a free bird is flying in the sky.

Beside that, when using
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motorbike
I can save
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a lot of
money per year. When using
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motorbike
I don't
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pay
tolls and road taxes like when using four-wheel
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vehicles
. I can save
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a lot of
money.
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car
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must
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pay
about one hundred VND for
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fees
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it is not when using
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motorbike
. Another example:
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Car
maintenance cost pretty higher than
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. The owner
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about fifty
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milions
VND
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car
for maintenance cost while the person who riding
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motorbike
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just
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have to
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one third cost.

The last reason is I like compactness of
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motorbike
. It is quite easy to find somewhere to park, it can go to narrow street easier.
For instance
: If you ride a
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go to a village, you can go into this village
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the way of village is
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very
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small
. With a
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can go in to it
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because
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motorbike
is smaller than
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car
to hang out or go to a coffee shop, you
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must
find somewhere that
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big
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can eeasier
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To sum up, I
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benefits like that, would you like to
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? I
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that in Vietnam,
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is the most popular form of transports that
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.
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So that
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aromatic gasoline to
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IELTS essay WHAT FORM OF TRANSPORT DO YOU PREFER TO USE? WHY?

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426 words
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