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Why do we consider modern maps as functional tools?

Why do we consider modern maps as functional tools? 6mbNW
It is hard to imagine everyday lives without the usage of modern maps. Indeed, such apps as Google maps, Apple maps serve as a useful instrument to those people who are constantly moving around and need to check the exact location of some places. It is fair to say our lives would have been far more difficult without digital maps due to their availability and significant benefits. Nevertheless, I do believe the modern maps still could be updated and renewed since the trends of the Fourth Industrial Revolution serve as indicator for further digitalization. Probably, the creation of Internet of Things could lead as to the point in which our devices would be able to construct the routes and check all the necessary information by themselves without our interference. The only thing which we would do is to say: “I need to find the point A and would like to go there by the city transport. ” And your gadgets would gladly do it.
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, Apple
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serve as a useful instrument to those
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lives
would have been far more difficult without digital
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maps
due to their availability and significant benefits.
Nevertheless
, I do believe the modern
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maps
still
could
be updated
and renewed since the trends of the Fourth Industrial Revolution serve as indicator for
further
digitalization.
Probably
, the creation of Internet of Things could lead as to the point in which our devices would be able to construct the routes and
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check
all the necessary information by themselves without our interference. The
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only
thing which we would do is to say: “I need to find the point A and would like to go there by the city transport. ” And your gadgets would
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IELTS essay Why do we consider modern maps as functional tools?

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