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What does the term international mean to you in the context of Afghanistan?

What does the term international mean to you in the context of Afghanistan? G36am
The term international means affecting two or more nations, having members between two nations and reaching beyond boundaries, accordingly international understanding or internationalism is a feeling that a person is not only a member of his country, but a member of his country as well. it is sense of world citizenship which enables individuals to hold a global perspective instead of local perspective. In the context of Afghanistan international understanding means to have good communication with the world, not hurting other countries in any case, and having an open heart toward the world. Consequently from the past up to now Afghanistan has its place in global communities such as United Nations. People pf Afghanistan has a challenging statement ‘one world or none’ It means that the world can not move future besides they have the whole world with them furthermore, our country had been a strategic place from the early ages in different aspects like transportation and politics. Afghanistan used to connect the world through the way of ‘Abrishum’ (silk way) and it still connects many Asian countries, also in terms of politics Afghanistan attracted the world its why every country wanna have a place in it. Afghanistan always had brotherhood with the world from a long time ago and never wanted to join in any war causing animosity between Afghanistan and any other country in the world for instance, if we look at the history when Afghanistan were requested by many countries to join the 2nd world war and take a side in it, but Afghanistan refused to join a war that spreads hatred. In sum there must be an international understanding among the countries in the world because the became so close if a country suffers from pollutions, terrorism, poverty it impacts other countries as well its why the world must move together.
The term
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means affecting two or more nations, having members between two nations and reaching beyond boundaries,
accordingly
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international
understanding or internationalism is a feeling that a person is not
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only
a member of his
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,
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a member of his
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country
as well
.
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it
is sense of
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citizenship which enables individuals to hold a global perspective
instead
of local perspective.

In the context of Afghanistan
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international
understanding means to have
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good
communication with the
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world
, not hurting other
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countries
in any case, and having an open heart toward the
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world
.
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Afghanistan has its place in global communities such as United Nations.
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People
pf Afghanistan has a challenging statement ‘one
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or none
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It means that the
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can not
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with them
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had been a strategic place from the early ages in
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aspects like transportation and politics. Afghanistan
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used
to connect the
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through the way of ‘
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Abrishum
’ (silk way) and it
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Asian
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,
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in terms of politics Afghanistan attracted the
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its why every
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have a place in it.

Afghanistan always had brotherhood with the
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world
from a long time ago and never wanted to
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join
in any war causing animosity between Afghanistan and any other
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in the
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for instance
, if we look at the history when Afghanistan
were requested
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the 2nd
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war and take a side in it,
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Afghanistan refused to
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join
a war that spreads hatred.

In sum there
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be an
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understanding among the
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the became
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close if a
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suffers from pollutions, terrorism, poverty it impacts other
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as well
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IELTS essay What does the term international mean to you in the context of Afghanistan?

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  American English
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305 words
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