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Describe your normal week?

Describe your normal week? pej3L
Out-of-school time is very important for a learner who wants to improve their knowledge. And to be with the family and use the information of the parents of the older brother and sister in daily life. I spent weeks away from school trying to find out more about what I was studying in school so that I could understand the lesson. And I read more about books written by influential people and scientists about their temperament and life. One of the important themes of these books was that I would never accept failure in my life and always pursue my goal and find ways to achieve it. One of the activities I enjoy the most is solving math questions because I get more energy after solving each difficult question. And I became more interested and spent a lot of time solving each question. Later, I helped with two younger sisters in scientific subjects. Without studying English at school, I tried to repeat with myself and read the necessary books and get acquainted with new topics. I like to run daily so that my illness does not put pressure on me so that I do not fall behind in my plans. We still play football with our friends several times a week and play a friendly game. We help each other in problems and we help each other in matters of life.
Out-of-school time is
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very
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important
for a learner who wants to
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improve
their knowledge.

And to be with the family and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the information of the parents of the older brother and sister in daily life. I spent weeks away from school trying to find out more about what I was studying in school
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so
that I could understand the lesson. And I read more about books written by influential
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people
and scientists about their temperament and life.

One of the
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important
themes of these books was that I would never accept failure in my life and always pursue my goal and find ways to achieve it.

One of the activities I enjoy the most is solving math questions
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because
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more energy after solving each difficult question.

And I became more interested and spent
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a lot of
time solving each question.

Later, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
with two younger sisters in scientific subjects.

Without studying English at school, I tried to repeat with myself and read the necessary books and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
acquainted with new topics.

I like to run daily
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so
that my illness does not put pressure on me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I do not fall behind in my plans.

We
still
play football with our friends several times a week and play a friendly game. We
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help
each other in
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problems and
we
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help
each other in matters of life.
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IELTS essay Describe your normal week?

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  American English
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