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What does it take to be a good parent? Discuses your opinion

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Parenthood is not an easy task. It is a responsibility. A parent must provide love, care safe home, health care, good education, and the well-being of his children. Nowadays the definition of being a good parent has its challenges. There are many things to consider these days. For example, home safety is no longer about safety measurements indoors like kitchen cabinets, toilet seat lockers. Outdoors like safety kits for sports, and riding a bike it has extended beyond that a parent must keep an open eye on T. V materials, Internet content, and smartphone Apps. To wake up in the middle of the night to rush your child to ER due to fever, or stomach ache. To help them with their school assignments an essay deadline with love and a big smile. To be supportive, helpful when needed. All that said being a loving caring, and there for your child is the most important thing to be a considered good parent.
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IELTS essay What does it take to be a good parent? Discuses your opinion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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