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What do you want to do when you are free?

What do you want to do when you are free? L9Okp
Movie night is something I do routinely, it helps me recharge my battery when I tired after each school day. Watching movies, especial detective movies help me in different ways. The schoolwork is stressful, demanding and it has been a drain on my energy, so I always watching movies when I am free. Sometimes I invite friends, but you know just once a month because my friends are regularly occupied with their work. You know, my friends often ask me why I don't go out instead of staying at home to watch movies and I say “Yeah, that’s my hobby. I just do the things I love, that’s all”.
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night is something I do
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me recharge my battery when I tired after each school day.

Watching
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movies
, especial detective
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movies
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I always watching
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when I am free.
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Sometimes
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my friends are
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ask me why I don't go out
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of staying at home to
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watch
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movies
and I say “Yeah, that’s my hobby. I
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IELTS essay What do you want to do when you are free?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
109 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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