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What do you study new subject ? Tell us the new subject

What do you study new subject? Tell us the new subject 1oELN
I am very interesting about space. In Saudi Arabia has grant to study space and, when I see it I feel very glad to join this but pefore of study important take above of 6 in ELTS exam I am very frightened for this test but I can do it. I will study this subject after I get the score for IELTS exam. rarely, here teacher studies the space every this subject outside of Saudi Arabia. So, I am very exiting to get this score and my dream one continues my study outside the Saudi Arabia or I study new subject space in America or Netherlands I hope to do this.
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this subject after I
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the score for IELTS exam.
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every this subject outside of Saudi Arabia.
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, I am
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exiting to
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this score and my dream one continues my
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outside the Saudi Arabia or I
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in America or Netherlands I hope to do this.

IELTS essay What do you study new subject? Tell us the new subject

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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