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What do you plan to do this weekend

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This weekend is so important for me. Since, this week is the last week of the month. I wish to completed all of my month’s schedule in this weekend. Though I have couple of days in my hand I will try to completed all tasks within these days. I was taking an online course from Coursera in last month but I did not complete that for some of personal issues. So far it an incomplete. Also, I have doing a lot for complete my schedule like practicing English as well as academic study. I was thought that I will be completed all of my schedule on time after I got notice time management is a big issue for any kinds of task and schedule. I thought if I somehow fail to complete my schedule in this weekend I will concentrate most when I will prepare my next task for upcoming weekend. Since, time management is a big obstacle for me to completed the tasks on time so, in next I will pride most on time management.
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I will concentrate most when I will prepare my
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IELTS essay What do you plan to do this weekend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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