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What do you plan to do this weekend

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Hobby means an activity done regularly in one's leisure time for pleasure. Every person has a particular hobby like others I have. But I have no specific one as people have. I like to do several kinds of work in my leisure time. I like to observe people most and create a story behind an object. If I describe my hobby then that stands, I like to observe people who are around me. I observe their actions, speech and what they have done frequently. I deeply try to understand their psychology behind their activities. On the contrary another favorite work in my leisure time is creating the story behind an object and the point of view of people about the different objects. Sometimes, I ask people around me what their point of views are about different objects. It gives me joy more than doing other activities in my leisure time.
Hobby means an activity done
regularly
in one's
leisure
time
for pleasure. Every person has a particular hobby like others I have.
But
I have no specific one as
people
have. I like to do several kinds of work in my
leisure
time
. I like to observe
people
most and create a story behind an
object
. If I
describe
my hobby then that stands, I like to observe
people
who are around me. I observe their actions, speech and what they have done
frequently
. I
deeply
try to understand their psychology behind their activities.
On the contrary
another favorite work in my
leisure
time
is creating the story behind an
object
and the point of view of
people
about the
different
objects
.
Sometimes
, I ask
people
around me what their point of views are about
different
objects
. It gives me joy more than doing other activities in my
leisure
time
.
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IELTS essay What do you plan to do this weekend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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